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Submission Name:
When First You Held Me
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Author:
doppelganger
ASL Info:
26/f/your brain
Elite Ratio:
1.98 - 34/223/160
Words:
58
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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Blah, I'm just writing this writers block out.
When First You Held Me
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When first you held me
All was clear.
The air was still
And hope was near.
Though my eyes
Were dry throughout,
My stuttering heart
Was not without -
A boost of some
Chemical strange
Some kind of comfort
That you gave.
The world was gone.
Scars disappeared,
And all there was
Was lying here.
Submitted on 2009-10-12 23:52:55
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Simple and beautiful, it couldn't be more perfect.
| Posted on 2009-10-13 00:00:00 | by
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