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    dots Submission Name: Through.dots

    Author: BahamutZer0
    ASL Info:    22 / Male / Wi, USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 14/21/11
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 808
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 266

       I don't like having to explain writings like this, but I will, because not everyone will understand why I chose to purposely make spelling mistakes and punctuation errors.

    It is somewhat of a depressing poem, while still at the same time, optimistic. I claim that I am "Getting through my days," but by the descending lack of faith as I go on and on, trying to stay optimistic, I eventually fall. The spelling mistakes and punctuation errors are intentional, and serve as a metaphor for tiredness.

    I believe we all go though this at one point or another.

    I haven't written a poem in over 4 years or so.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    It's how I get through my days.

    Its how I get through my days.

    It's how i get through.

    Its how i get through.

    i get through.

    i get through

    im thru


    Submitted on 2009-10-13 03:48:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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