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    dots Submission Name: Faith. dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 25
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    dotsFaith. dots
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    If there were a thousand words to describe this feeling,
    I'd write a million.
    If there was a way not to be afraid,
    I'd jump from a building.
    Were there a way to have you hold me forever,
    I'd ask for eternity.
    Rest assured there will be a way and a will for everything,
    Once I find it.
    Walk the broken path,
    And God will mend the sidewalks.
    If things are meant to be,
    Have faith...
    And all things will fall into place.




    Submitted on 2009-10-13 15:22:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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