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    dots Submission Name: Best Feeling.dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBest Feeling.dots
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    Feelings falling faster than the pouring rain from heavy clouds,
    Like a heart heavy with love and scars,
    Hoping that this is right- that this is real-
    When in all senses of perfection it never fails to send my heart to pound out a new beat,
    In a flutter of something we might never understand to the fullest extent,
    And in those dreams with your arms to keep me warm and safe,
    To rescue me from insanity,
    You’re the best feeling in the world.




    Submitted on 2009-10-13 15:23:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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