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    dots Submission Name: Just a Disturbance in the Airdots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    22/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 47/151/126
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsJust a Disturbance in the Airdots
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    words of wisdom beating
    against the ear drums in my head
    fallen trees alone in the woods
    make no sound, just a disturbance in the air
    Knowledge willingly fall into books
    To educate the yielding followeres
    yet one paper and pen holds power
    and creates a brilliant mind of learning




    Submitted on 2009-10-13 20:33:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem certainly disturbed the air in my head! I feel like a summer lighting storm has fried my circuit and left a tornado of smoke. I must remember that dust storms may exist and that all cats do not disappear no matter what their quantum state
    | Posted on 2012-08-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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