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    dots Submission Name: Alone... Hurtingdots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dotsAlone... Hurtingdots

    I am alone in this world,
    a world that billions and billions live within,

    I am hurting in this lonely populated world,
    Pain many of you have or are feeling,

    I have told myself for THE FINAL TIME!
    There is a reason...
    I may not know it... but there IS!
    There is a GOD
    Loving caring GOD

    Fuck reasons
    fuck the ALMIGHTY

    For if there were reasons I'd know them by now
    If there were a God
    I wouldn't be so dam alone in such a populated world
    I wouldn't be hurting in this lonely existence I am living

    So FUCK your positivity
    Fuck your "reasons"

    They no long fly with me

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      Harsh poem.
    I feel the same way, I don't believe in God, if that's what you're getting at. I have to take R.S. at school (Religous Studies) and everything that they are against Homosexuality and Contraception and [censored] like that is just ridiculous. I know some people will disagree with me, but I don't like the idea that doing one thing wrong will wind you up in hell.

    | Posted on 2009-11-21 00:00:00 | by smexybabe0101 | [ Reply to This ]

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