Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Alone... Hurtingdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 470
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 755



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAlone... Hurtingdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I am alone in this world,
    a world that billions and billions live within,

    I am hurting in this lonely populated world,
    Pain many of you have or are feeling,

    I have told myself for THE FINAL TIME!
    There is a reason...
    I may not know it... but there IS!
    There is a GOD
    Loving caring GOD

    Fuck reasons
    fuck the ALMIGHTY

    For if there were reasons I'd know them by now
    If there were a God
    I wouldn't be so dam alone in such a populated world
    I wouldn't be hurting in this lonely existence I am living

    So FUCK your positivity
    Fuck your "reasons"

    They no long fly with me




    Submitted on 2009-10-14 11:26:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Harsh poem.
    I feel the same way, I don't believe in God, if that's what you're getting at. I have to take R.S. at school (Religous Studies) and everything that they are against Homosexuality and Contraception and [censored] like that is just ridiculous. I know some people will disagree with me, but I don't like the idea that doing one thing wrong will wind you up in hell.

    -Abbie.
    xx
    | Posted on 2009-11-21 00:00:00 | by smexybabe0101 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    179380

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Live In Between written by teika5
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    untitled written by Outlaw
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Whispered written by endlessgame23
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry