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    dots Submission Name: Dance Of The Wolvesdots
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    Author: WolvenGlade
    ASL Info:    16/Male/Britain
    Elite Ratio:    3.43 - 14/13/7
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
    Total Views: 41
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 811



    Description:
       Just a short one...The idea suddenly sprung to mind...And like many of my writings I wrote it on the spur of the moment. Can not really explain my feelings on this one...


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    dotsDance Of The Wolvesdots
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    Come dance, sway and howl to our motherly moon, her claws extended in a beautiful array of white and grey

    Hold our souls in place, for a night of eternal grace, cold and bitter the nights bite is, but hold no grudge

    It's the whole sense of our motherly moon, pounding the pads into the deep and cracked wound, come and dance to our musical embrace

    We will save your soul, take our clawed hand and feel the thud and dance of our moonlit sway, we can help you run away

    Come dance, sway and howl to our motherly moon, her claws extended in a beautiful array of white and grey

    Come dance the dance of wolves, fur hot and musky, much to the dismay of man, we see the moonlit Glade and its powerful embrace.

    -Jake Bennett.




    Submitted on 2009-10-14 15:21:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really admire this poem, not only does it paint a picture but it possesses a great uniqueness that can’t be described as anything but your own. The way the words help me visualize the setting so well, really made me think.
    Even though it is a bit short it’s well put together and structured so as a result I really enjoyed reading this piece.

    Awesome Job

    -DragonQueen
    | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by DragonQueen | [ Reply to This ]
      Wish I could write something like this on the spur of the moment. You have a talent many would envy. I love the images this brings to mind. I can feel the cold of the moonlit night. Hear the panting of wolves as they dance. Wonderful.
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]


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