Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Full of Laughterdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Rant/Alone
    Total Views: 668
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 616



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFull of Laughterdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Life is building blocks of downers
    no need for the drugs,
    just wake up
    live a day of life within these shoes,
    for you would quickly see

    All that I am after is a life full of laughter,
    Yet this life is full of building blocks
    that are weighting me down

    Every ounce of myself I put toward the "Brighter Side" of things
    Nevertheless these building blocks grow...
    A form of downers they are...
    As it weighs heavy on these shoulders of mine

    STILL...
    All that I am after is a life full of laughter




    Submitted on 2009-10-14 16:45:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    179385

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Fasade written by jackz
    Records I written by Raphael
    Cover written by saartha
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    no words for how graceful you are in this moment written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Yes written by poetotoe
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    Formal Jen written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry