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    dots Submission Name: Full of Laughterdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Rant/Alone
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    dotsFull of Laughterdots
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    Life is building blocks of downers
    no need for the drugs,
    just wake up
    live a day of life within these shoes,
    for you would quickly see

    All that I am after is a life full of laughter,
    Yet this life is full of building blocks
    that are weighting me down

    Every ounce of myself I put toward the "Brighter Side" of things
    Nevertheless these building blocks grow...
    A form of downers they are...
    As it weighs heavy on these shoulders of mine

    STILL...
    All that I am after is a life full of laughter




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