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    dots Submission Name: When u love someonedots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhen u love someonedots
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    Blood to blood
    and pain to pain
    is what i feel when i'm alone,
    but I don't regert it
    cuz i met you.
    but now my world is coming down
    cuz i'm alone
    without you again
    I feel the pain that was inside
    but now it's out.
    so I bleed the pain that was inside
    and it berings me back to you.
    Till the blood is gone again.




    Submitted on 2009-10-14 18:34:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh its ohk
    | Posted on 2009-11-11 00:00:00 | by Katsi039tsahente | [ Reply to This ]
      I couldn't connect with it for some reason. I'm in too good of a mood since I'm about to get off of work..lol
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]


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