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    dots Submission Name: Heart, Have Hopedots
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    Author: SaddenedSongbrd
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 7/22/37
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 48
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    dotsHeart, Have Hopedots
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    A reflection of candlight glistens in her eyes
    darkness consumes the blanketing skies
    besides tiny, sparkling lights
    which dance, peacefully at great heights

    The night is dark, but not is her mind
    for a small glimmer of hopeful time
    this is a feeling that she has missed
    wondering even if dreams exist.

    Happiness and peace have arisen tonight
    And though the heart is lacking light
    do not stop or shed a tear..
    for then the stars will disappear
    and drown in salty seas.




    Submitted on 2009-10-15 01:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really found poignancy in this piece and I had an epiphany of my own relating to my life NOW. I enjoy minimalism and the value of saying much with little words.
    Great!
    Enjoy the NOW with Love,Peace,Joy,Abundance & Smiles 2 Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2009-10-15 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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