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Submission Name: alone dots

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Author:	cor
ASL Info:	16/M/NY
Elite Ratio:	2.28 - 28/24/30
Words:	48

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	32
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	271

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alone

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I walk down this long road
hoping to find my own path
lost in my own mind
i trek blindly in the darkness

with no one to guide me
I must become my own leader
with no shining star to be my constant
i have little hope

Submitted on 2009-10-15 12:48:14 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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thanks for the comment.
I love this! it matches what I'm feeling on the inside. I lost my best friend and I can't get him back. I have tried everything. your peice reminds me of this song by Jhonny Cash.
It's called Hurt. you should look it up. It really geos well with this poem.
-Rachi:)-
| Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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