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    dots Submission Name: Spite Of Summerdots
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    Author: lechuga
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/7
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsSpite Of Summerdots
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    I’m going to steal a little of your style, now
    A few of your words,
    A bit of your, -attitude-
    (That carefree feeling I have so long been without.)
    Maybe you’ll notice, but it’s something I doubt.
    I don’t want to remember
    I want to never forget
    Hide it away at the back of my mind,
    This, I still can’t bring myself to regret
    I could write this all down,
    Fill page one through one hundred reasons-
    Reasons you’re sick, and cruel
    That this was -so- not the season
    All reasons aside,
    (Subtleties, secrecies, your touch to me.)
    I still want this back.
    (Forget my lips on your back.)
    Tell me you never cared,
    Even when this had just begun
    But this still isn’t, simply can’t be done.
    I admire your selfish mind
    With skilled ease,
    You ignored my desperate pleas

    She knew what I didn’t,
    Try though I did,
    I couldn’t find respect for you
    Even if I was still just a kid
    I told her what you’ll never hear,
    Not ever from me, dear
    I could never let you have it
    I don’t want you to deserve this
    So, I’ll keep it a secret
    And blow you one last kiss.




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