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    dots Submission Name: I Stand In Natures Wonder dots
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    Author: littlepoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 688/544/259
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    out in open where the ground is your featherbed
    the sky is open and you can see every star

    where the rain in is lost before it falls
    and like the season before

    I'm a child lost between the here and there
    clouds drifting by tattered with a splash of color

    pink and blue with a purple hue
    I long to see somewhere green

    where the wind blows softly
    as to cool my spirit

    I don't want to see road kill by the side of the road
    autum is falling it's slowly getting colder

    just listen to open wind long and hard
    you can hear the coyotes yell for there mates

    or a fresh kill for the pack
    it tacks a wild fear for the farmer heart and his cows

    out in the open range
    when you see a pack of coyotes

    a attack a helpless cow giveing birth
    as it makes the farmer mad

    I see mother nature takeing course
    of life and death I stand in natures wonder




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