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    dots Submission Name: Forever Neverdots
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    Author: InsanityVanity
    ASL Info:    16/male/noneyah
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 7/10/20
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1682



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    dotsForever Neverdots
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    She must never know
    How I truly feel.
    For this secret
    My lips are sealed.

    I try to hide it
    But give myself away.
    My body betrays me.
    My mind will run astray.

    I try to stay strong
    But I lose my head.
    My blood runs cold.
    My heart burns red.

    Her beautiful brown eyes
    Will glisten in the light.
    Her look takes my breathe
    And makes my chest tight.

    My pencil quivers
    At the thought of her embrace
    Emotions so strong
    A tear runs down my face

    So long I’ve wished to tell her
    That my love burns forever
    But the day this love is returned
    The 16th of never

    I fear this rejection
    It clouds my vision
    “Do I tell her or no?”
    How do I make this decision?

    We live on as barely friends
    Hardly any words are spoken
    So I cling to her in my dreams
    Pray to God I’m not awoken

    I choose to speak in the hall
    “You look so pretty.”
    My voice trails on
    My words not witty



    My fears realized
    You see how I play the part
    You see through my mask
    And bare witness to my heart

    This question you ask
    When I answer I shiver
    An ache in my head
    A pain in my liver

    I give up hope
    You already know the truth
    My mouth opens
    I speak “I love you.”

    At the sound of my words
    You run like the wind
    Only one thought in my mind
    Will I see you again?




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