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    dots Submission Name: Just to prove itdots
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    Author: InsanityVanity
    ASL Info:    16/male/noneyah
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 7/9/18
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1074



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       I think its a little too much


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    dotsJust to prove itdots
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    Tell me my love, what do you ask.
    You are worth the risk of any task.
    Shall I put on a show and wear my mask.
    I could capture a cloud in a flask.

    What do you want, please let me know.
    Nothing else matters, just tell me, I値l go.
    I would climb a mountain to bring you snow.
    I would blacken the sun just to see you glow.

    I値l put 1,000,000 words in a single poem.
    I would go around the world just to bring you home.
    From solid gold I値l make your hair a comb.
    Would you like to see Italy, we値l start in Rome?

    Anything you want, what would you have me do?
    I would play Moses and part the seas for you.
    Then I would take you on a ship as your captain and crew.
    Just tell me what you want or I won稚 have a clue.

    I would give you my life and all of these things.
    I would take you to a place where the birds always sing.
    On my knees place on your hand a ring.
    Together we値l see what the future will bring.




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      This is very sweet! I dont think its overboard because the everyone could be a poet. But this write is great in almost every manner.

    "Tell me my love, what do you ask.
    You are worth the risk of any task.
    Shall I put on a show and wear my mask.
    I could capture a cloud in a flask."

    I love the beginning in particular! It may be really corny but you put it in a way that it doesnt even seem it at all!

    Great Write

    Fana
    | Posted on 2009-10-17 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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