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    dots Submission Name: Autumn Haikudots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
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       <@> Love this X of Year ;-) Enjoy the NOW with a smile to share ;-)

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    dotsAutumn Haikudots

    The trees tell their tale
    Color creates change collide
    Announcing As All

    Submitted on 2009-10-15 20:07:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Indeed, the trees telegraph the message! I too love this time of year!

    Excellent Haiku!
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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