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    dots Submission Name: chance of rain dots
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    Author: witheringmisery
    ASL Info:    16/F/Deadman's Lair
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 2/5/12
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 41
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1568



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    dotschance of rain dots
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    the sun peeks through the clouds today
    the clouds that are so big and gray
    that stand high above the world
    threatening us with a chance of rain

    if it could be today, of all days
    i'd teach my broken wings to fly
    jump from this 10 story building
    and finally let this go, and die

    and each story holds a story of childhood days
    running, playing, screaming, not knowing
    that these great sunny days
    would eventually be ruined with rain

    you'd wait behind that window
    watching the sky for a chance the sun
    would just once, give you the sign
    you could go back outside and run

    eventually you come to like the sounds
    the sounds of the rain, that let you sit
    let you think, if you could just change this
    everything would cause you and them less pain

    each story holds a story of older days
    sitting, staring, thinking, not knowing
    that these old rainy days
    would eventually be ruined by the sun

    gravity finally begins to hit you
    as your skin grows too big for your bones
    it wrinkles and sags trying to hold on
    just like your mind, desperately holds on

    to the memories you had
    of childhood days playing in the sun
    never knowing, those days would be ruined
    with age, with people, with pain

    why would it even bother to rain?








    Submitted on 2009-10-15 22:32:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I enjoyed reading this very much.
    I'm found of reading poety based off of rain, and this was breathtaking.
    I personally love rainy days and always had, even when I was a little girl.
    My mother told me not to play out in the rain because I would get sick, but I did anyways.
    And my mother was right.

    But I can see where you are coming from.
    The ending of this was amazing; I loved all of it.

    Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by Vermalin | [ Reply to This ]



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