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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    21.F.NV
    Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 30/22/20
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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    Fifteen minutes until my birthday, and I am happy. This is somewhat of a new feeling for me. I am not exactly sure how to interpret that; therefore, I won't. Being happy is more than fine with me. Fine. What a strange word. What does it even mean, fine?
    Anyway, happiness is upon me, and he is not. What a feeling! Enjoying it is next. -at least for the time being.




    Submitted on 2009-10-16 01:47:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy Belated Birthday! Sounds like you're spending yours 'numb with that drizzle-topping of Fine'. Throw a few Don't-Miss-You sprinkles on the pile, and it will be a convincing treat... only you can taste the truth.
    | Posted on 2009-10-18 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      i like little doo-dads of thought. as a friend always says: it's a place holder.

    tid bits of time and words strung together. reminders to self. this is where i was/am. and could be again.

    hmmmm.

    happiness. it's always a nice place to start. or realize. or keep little parts of. or be consistantly in. or at least trying to be.

    | Posted on 2009-10-17 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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