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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Care So Why Sould Youdots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       Well this is just how I made myself over come this monster how I faced him and how it went away over time. For I did not want for him to leave me, but I had to face facts and see what he was doing was very wrong and shouldn't have been done, but what's done is done and there is no reason for me to say he shouldn't have done that or someone could have helped me because the only person that could have really stopped it was me and I did. It wasn't the best way, but it was a way. If this is happening to anyone on this site don't be afraid to come out and say what's happening.


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    dotsI Don't Care So Why Sould Youdots
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    Yestherday i died,
    Today i'm dieing,
    Tomorw i'll be alone.
    Who would care?
    I don't care.
    so why would you.
    Call me what you want,
    it doesn't hurt me anymore
    hit me till you can't tell theres any bruse's,
    I don't care i'm not scared.
    Just don't come around
    and act like it didn't happen.
    you can say that it didn't,
    but we both know that it did.
    so i'll tell you.
    "yestherday I died
    today i'm alive
    tomorw is still unknown"




    Submitted on 2009-10-16 09:08:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a good poem i wish you had a description about it. I really like it though. If I knew the description I could comment it better, but if it's about you I am sorry and that is sad
    | Posted on 2009-10-16 00:00:00 | by MiseryMarie | [ Reply to This ]


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