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    dots Submission Name: Recipient of Lovedots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRecipient of Lovedots
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    I want to be a recipient of your Love.
    I want to feel the kind of Love that I give on to you.
    I want it in vast quantities.

    I want a Sammy Sosa, Barry Bonds kind of Love.
    Hit me with everything youíve got.
    I want a home run hit, grand slam thank you maíam.

    Donít stop that magnetic flow of Love.
    Take that fatal plunge and make lifelong commitments.
    Overdose does not apply because Iíll never get enough.

    Keep that Love coming.
    Love as fatal as the bubonic plague.
    As feisty as a bee sting.

    I want to receive that Love forever.
    Till every seedling germinates.
    Till dew evaporates with dayís age.

    Never stop loving me.




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