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    dots Submission Name: Cause of Hate.dots
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    Author: Scaredheart
    ASL Info:    15/ Female/ NC
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 92/62/50
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 39
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    dotsCause of Hate.dots
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    You hate her,
    she hates you.
    Why we're all asking,
    cause we know the Truth.

    She's lighter than you,
    her skins a cream not Carmel color tint.
    His skins not white,
    so you presume.
    Her face has round eyes,
    so she must speak with lies.
    His eyes are slitted ovals,
    so he must want terror!

    Yeah,
    there you go.
    Label before you know,
    he, she, we, they.
    Their all the same thing.
    You make a invisible line,
    that no one can cross.
    Cause it's in your head,
    and no one can change that.

    Racist bitch,
    Sexist Hoe.
    Ageist Frog,
    and the Radical Bomb.
    You wonder why we all hate,
    you ask each other why their different from you.

    It's because you said they were so,
    lie to your self.
    Play you make believe game,
    judge others by their color, Gender, or age.
    Because in the end,
    you're the cause of all the hate. . .




    Submitted on 2009-10-16 19:56:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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