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A letter to whom it no longer concerns

Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
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Words: 120
Class/Type: Poetry /Satire
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Dear mother... Go to hell ... and i mean that in the nicest way possible

A letter to whom it no longer concerns

To whom it may concern,
IF it concerns you anymore. I've come to terms with closing this worn and battered door. I no longer wish to bicker, or be treated as one forlorne. So, with all due respect. I now take my leave. And venture on with the next step. I've found better prospects, and a better kind of war. It's easier to confuse an army, than a commander with a drawn sword. For every thrust I've parried, and cannon ball I've dodge. I've become so tired and weary. So now I take my leave and walk out your front door. Thank for all you've taught me, now i face the world.

Your daughter

Submitted on 2009-10-17 00:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, very effective at making you see the anger. And the thank you at the end really sets a crazy conclusion.
| Posted on 2009-10-17 00:00:00 | by Peacejoe | [ Reply to This ]

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