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    dots Submission Name: Little Girl Of 17dots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This is a poem about another site im on called VampireFreaks.com. There are all these little girls posting half naked and naked pictures of them selves on there and we have recently lost a member to a stalker. I hope this hits someone hard enough to realize that in Reality no one on the internet is who they say they are!


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    dotsLittle Girl Of 17dots
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    Little Girl of 17,
    Bra and panties making a scene,
    Have you no shame?


    Little Girl in The Frame,
    Do you think being naked brings you fame?


    Little Girl selling herself on the streets,
    Does mommy know about the bloody sheets?



    Little Girl on the news,
    Daddy now knows about the bruises.


    Little Girl Fallen From Grace,
    Left to rot, dirt on her face.


    Little Girl In an open casket,
    Family remembering you in your basenett.


    Little Girl Burried in the ground,
    Did you think you would come around?


    Little Girl your family mournes,
    May you rest in peace with your reality torn.




    Submitted on 2009-10-17 10:44:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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