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    dots Submission Name: LoveIs Not Ment for The Brokendots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    20/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 312/359/124
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsLoveIs Not Ment for The Brokendots
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    How broken am I,
    Cant open my eyes to see,
    I am not in love
    The broken arent ment to be.
    If i ever did its all lost to me now.
    Sorry i lied,
    Love is suicide.



    I blame "God"
    For my disbelief
    So much goes on
    He was never with me.



    Everytime i die
    God laughs inside
    Everytime i fail
    Love becomes more frail.



    Broken are not ment to love
    Fallen Angel,
    Wings Crippled
    Always Mourning.



    How Broken am I?
    I never take the time
    No beauty resides
    Dont even know how to explain
    To think about this
    Is so much pain.



    My Tears are like confetti
    They fall like rain
    Feeling alone,
    Broken, insane.



    Life is so bitter sweet
    Always getting Worse
    Before you get a break.



    Heart of glass
    Shattered so much
    Fallen is my heart
    So out of touch.



    Look around,
    Are you broken like me?
    No one is,
    They are all so happy,
    Broken in love are not ment to be.




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