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Speak of Love


Author: iHaveNoName323
ASL Info:    23/M/NC
Elite Ratio:    5.6 - 37 /37 /26
Words: 88
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Speak of Love



When you speak of love
and all that it’s worth
you will come upon a field
in a valley of lust
with temptations bound
in a fruitful display

When you speak of love
and all that it’s worth
you will find yourself renewed
with passions abound
like a roaring fire
on a hot summer day

When you speak of love
and all that it’s worth
you will have lived
like a heroic king
and when you look back upon your life
you will simply rejoice




Submitted on 2009-10-17 11:32:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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