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    dots Submission Name: Memories Gonedots
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    Author: lechuga
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/7
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 32
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsMemories Gonedots
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    It has been done.
    Distraction follows distraction,
    And this is what I've become
    I keep my thoughts
    They do not stray
    To sickening ones of you
    I'm finished pleading this case
    The time we spent,
    I've tried to erase
    They became a colourless blur
    Paused only by your face
    The flashes, the vivid contrast
    I let go of you
    And ask why I still have that

    With time, I forget the dearest faces
    Even the most tender touch
    Said you loved me, in so many places
    I will forget yours too




    Submitted on 2009-10-18 16:25:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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