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    dots Submission Name: The Mind Of A Writerdots
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    Author: lechuga
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/7
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsThe Mind Of A Writerdots
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    A writer's mind is vile and tainted
    What you see of them,
    Is a mask that they've painted
    Mind of mine,
    Such a rotten thing
    My thoughts are decayed
    And it makes me sing

    These words, I can't keep-
    And so they creep
    (I can't stand their whispers..)
    Out my eyes
    Out my mouth
    (I must let them out!)

    And when that wall breaks,
    My words, they don't trickle
    They race and they flow
    They rush of my pencil
    Out, onto this page
    As a spider's web,
    They have no age
    These scribbles, they weave
    Full to the brim
    With spite and trickery
    They're no longer mine, but
    Every bit as bitter as me.




    Submitted on 2009-10-18 16:35:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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