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    dots Submission Name: Icy Spikesdots
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    Author: SAGITTREVEALED
    ASL Info:    22/m/ P.C. FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 26/26/16
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
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       Just because it's that time of year again.


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    The time has come again, which rips from it's slumber, my unwielding consiousness.
    As the leaves turn and the winds change, my thoughts swing again to the dark half of the year. This time, the time of Harvest, of the Dark Solstice, and back to the Festival of Lights, always drives into me, It's Icy Spikes.
    The cold wind blows unyielding as the Earth calls back all she has wrought through the year, to her now frozen grasp. As the planet turns face from the warmth of the sun, I turn from without to within. I have come full circle yet another year. From my birth to what is sure to be my death, the months pass slowly.
    The joy of new life, to the worry of loss, turns again. protection always comes at the highest of prices. Can I complete the destiny that I was called forth to do, without putting those around me at risk? Wings flap, talons gash, teeth bite, and yet my sword stands still at the ready. When is my time?
    Not this year. I would know. So as Fall turns to Winter, and the world turns anew, the season drives again it's Icy Spikes, and I stand ready and waiting still.




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      Deep man..... I like how you describe the changing of life on our planet as well as the changing of ones self in this manner of changing seasons. I feel much like you in some ways as life goes through its cycle. But as I say may we find solice in those we hold close through these changes good or bad. thanks for this short simple and wonderful piece.

    Justin
    | Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, love, whatever is troubling you?
    How can the months have passed so slowly for you yet, have disapeared before my eyes? What is time anyway? Other than an invention like the wheel or toliet paper? Perhaps the world would have been better off without it. I love you, and wish that when you read this you'll explain this to me!

    <3, (xoxo),
    Carrie
    | Posted on 2009-10-20 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      oh em gee Runes hahaha

    anyhoo...i get more of a coming into ones own from this...with the whole time reference ie

    Wings flap, talons gash, teeth bite, and yet my sword stands still at the ready. When is my time?

    something you're waiting for...and watching the seasons roll into one another...waiting for you're time to come. what kind of threw me off was the

    Wings flap, talons gash, teeth bite,

    but then again it fit with the whole olden times theme of the write.

    The cold wind blows unyielding as the Earth calls back all she has wrought through the year, to her now frozen grasp. As the planet turns face from the warmth of the sun, I turn from without to within. I have come full circle yet another year. From my birth to what is sure to be my death, the months pass slowly.

    I Love That!!!
    makes me feel as if although so much is out of our HANDS we still have a certain amount of
    'other worldly' dominance over everything...weird
    but me likey...some times it better to just believe then to ask questions...for me that is

    Thanks for sharing


    | Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      This is ominous... like, the kind of ominous you're telling CNN reporters about a week after reading, while everyone on campus lies like ragdolls splashed in ketchup behind the camera lens... "...14 people killed, 13 other shot, and reports that Shooter was behaving in an "ominous" fashion prior to the murders..."

    I do hope that's just my over-active imagination.
    | Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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