Friends Are Special by Vlanderson

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Author:	Vlanderson
ASL Info:	18/Female/Wisconsin
Elite Ratio:	5.68 - 3/3/4
Words:	97

Class/Type:	Poetry/Friendship
Total Views:	43
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Friends Are Special dots

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Friends are there when you smile,
Friends are there when you cry.
They make it all worth while,
They bring you back to life.

Together with a friend,
It's always the best.
Together till the end,
That's better then the rest.

Friends you can share your story,
They listen to every word.
They'll help you when you worry,
And make sure your voice is heard.

Spend time with a friend and heal your wounds,
Tomorrow will hit you again.
They'll always be right there for you,
That is a true friend.

Submitted on 2009-10-19 00:31:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thank you everyone for taking your time to comment. I really appriciate it. I'll try to write more poems when I can, but I mostly can only write them when they suddenly pop into my head. Unless I took the time to sit down. Hahahaha. I ramble too much. Thank you everyone.
| Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by Vlanderson | [ Reply to This ]
  very sweet indeed...a little mother goose but who am i to judge the rhythm and rhyme...it's hard to have a fine balance of both. don't listen to me...i'm a rambling internal rhymer haha

your request for comments is unspecified so i'll just leave thoughts behind. friends are the one thing we on earth that can respond, relate, reward and react to what we're going through on a day to day basis... without being blood related haha
when you can find someone to share a bit of your soul with it's priceless...nothing can compare

reminds of :

What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies.
~ Aristotle

yeah

so thanks for sharing...a good day to celebrate FRIENDSHIP
| Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
  True Friends are harder to find than Unicorns... beware those field horses with a sugar cone strapped to their foreheads, they are everywhere.
| Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
  Awuh, this was really sweet to read.
It reminds me of one friend in particular that has been with me from the beginning and to no end.
I loved this write a whole lot, it made me smile and brightened my mood.
You rarely see any writting about friendship, and I'm glad to have stumbled upon one.

I like the flow of this, and it makes you want to read it more then once.
I can relate to it.
Not just that, you have a way with words that make it... Pop off the page?
Yeah, if that makes any sense. ^_^

Keep on writing. You should show off your talent.
Unless you are one of those people that keep to themselves, of course.
But anywho, this was heartwarming.
I loved it.
| Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by Vermalin | [ Reply to This ]

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