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    dots Submission Name: High Schooldots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Rant/
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsHigh Schooldots
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    ... It happens to us all at some point during our high school career
    You get picked on,
    Poked fun at for every little thing,
    Becoming bitter has you know what lies ahead.

    For I do not know the extent of your torment
    nevertheless I feel your pain,

    As years have passed and I have grown older
    I acknowledge I did not know their living situation,
    I had no knowledge of their personal problems,
    Therefore I just maybe have been the only one to put a smile on their face
    Their rude comment in front of their buddies may have been the only up-lifting part of his/her day

    For I know my home life was far from perfect, although I am not one to take it out on others to bring myself up from a shitty home life
    there are those out there whom are

    Yet I still cannot hold this against them
    for I know I am an ugly duck,
    I know I am one to stick out,
    As I know how it is to go to school with a horrible day to lye ahead of you after school

    So I conclude with:

    Consider your tormentor's personal life,
    Think of the possibilities and how this may affect his/her attitude toward you,
    Do your best to not get bitter,
    Grow, strengthen yourself... And with this you will Go Far!!




    Submitted on 2009-10-19 06:48:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you are a beautiful swan.
    high school is a mentality
    not a place
    i left that place
    some people dont
    [censored] em
    live your life
    | Posted on 2009-10-20 00:00:00 | by ghad | [ Reply to This ]


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