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    dots Submission Name: Love??dots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 28
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    dotsLove??dots
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    whats going on
    I'm so confused
    you crushed my every being
    i felt so dead
    with no chance of recovery
    but in a flash
    within seconds of hearing your voice
    my heart once again beats
    and i am overflowing with life
    but how can this be
    with everything that has happened
    is it possible to still have this
    overbearing love for you
    how
    i don't understand
    how can the person who emotionally killed me
    be the same person saving me again
    and why does my heart still beat for you
    now i know exactly how right i was
    when i said
    "my love for you will never die"
    and
    "you could slit my throat and with my dying breath i would apologize for getting blood on your shirt"
    this is true love
    If i hurt you like that
    would i be the one
    to make your heart beat again
    to make the butterflies in your stomach fly
    in formation
    in other words
    do you love me
    as much as i love you
    even with no reason to even like you




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