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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/You left me
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    Bytes: 80



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       This is just something that came to mind while I was in my room talking to my ex-boyfriend on the phone and I just wanted to write it down to see what other people will say about it.


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    "I hate that you'll never remember
    what all never forgot"




    Submitted on 2009-10-19 15:24:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm,... I like this. To me it says something like, because hes your ex boyfriend, he lost something, or maybe he doesnt seem to understand something that everyone else seems to know... but its very compicated. I think its something strong. hmmm... made me think.
    | Posted on 2009-10-19 00:00:00 | by MidnightSun89 | [ Reply to This ]


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