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    dots Submission Name: fuck.dots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
    Total Views: 650
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 535



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    dotsfuck.dots
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    what the fuck do you want from me?
    how is it that you're completely oblivious??
    you've got to be fucking kidding me.
    obviously you don't give a fuck about me enough to think about how i feel.

    is it me? or did we just not talk about how you should think more?
    think about what the fuck you say, what the fuck you do.
    cause right now, you're fucking killing me.
    and obviously, you don't give a fuck.

    so you know what, yeah, fuck you too.




    Submitted on 2009-10-19 21:32:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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