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    dots Submission Name: Repetition of Laughterdots
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    Author: halopop
    ASL Info:    25/f/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 167/141/21
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Happy
    Total Views: 469
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 191



    Description:
       This was something i used to call "Repetitions".... Hey, Shakespeare has his Sonnets, Emily Dickinson has her numbered thing... this is my thing... dang-it!

    - fifi


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    dotsRepetition of Laughterdots
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    Laughter
    rolling through my mind
    like a bowling ball of happiness
    roaring down the alley of imagination
    knocking over the pins of reality...

    STRIKE!




    Submitted on 2004-07-20 21:40:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. It gave me a chuckle. I think it would be cool if you could expand it more. I love extended metaphors. It is nice as is though.
    | Posted on 2004-07-24 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]



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