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    dots Submission Name: rhymes with orangedots
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    Author: ghad
    ASL Info:    25/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    5.86 - 45/28/38
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1578



    Description:
       up late watching married with children bored to wits end having fun with phonemes and cultural memes


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    Star gazer turn astronomer
    That’s my moniker
    Dock the monocle
    Fiction topical
    Sling it madrigal
    How fucking magical
    Now scratch the surface and
    Brush away the hair follicles
    Mock the cast of comical sons prodigal
    Caracal’s canines puncture
    My jugular
    Bleeding arterial
    By felonious feline imposter
    Teach me teacher and proctor
    How to talk to
    Kitty impromptu
    Arrival of can do attitude
    Shower of candy platitudes
    Accolades and gratitude
    Become commando
    Acme crescendo
    Check the tempo matches
    The pulse at my temple
    No pendulum or metronome needed
    Thoughts fleeted
    Ego deflated and retreated
    No more tricks treated like manic tics
    Over my somatic anagrams of semantics
    Cemented in plastic
    Demented and drastic
    Lethargic sloth with crass tactics
    Burnt up like match sticks
    Strike me I’m active
    Angst ridden
    But driven like Andretti
    Now toss out the confetti
    And confess to the crimes
    I’ll soon be committing
    This guy’s disguise stays distinguished
    By a feigned reign of anguish
    That rains on your parish
    Come out pariah
    I am your parrot
    Call for me master
    I am your puppet
    Hello my new found martyr
    Pluck the strings in the pulpit
    You bias old pundit
    Come forth and quit sulking
    (before I administer
    hardcore skull fucking)




    Submitted on 2009-10-20 06:17:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    nigga you is some kinda cold.
    | Posted on 2009-10-20 00:00:00 | by InsanityVanity | [ Reply to This ]


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