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    dots Submission Name: Everyday Prince Charming.dots
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    Author: Namlooc20
    ASL Info:    26/Male/Spokane, WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 359/327/107
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 676
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Just Something I wrote at work quickly.
    Something I advocate, girls don't expect that prince who kills shit. The total badass. Isn't the guy you really want the one who will love you unconditionally in his plaid shirt and shorts?


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    dotsEveryday Prince Charming.dots
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    Its true he canít fly
    And no he doesnít slay,
    Dragons arenít his enemy
    Itís the time of everyday

    Bullets will kill him
    And moving trains will hurt
    Any senseless action
    Heíll live under the dirt

    So his weapons arenít guns
    And swords arenít his skill
    Heíll steal your heart
    His words will kill

    His armor isnít shining
    And his steed isnít fast
    The plaid shirt is still faded
    And his heart dying fast

    For heís not your knight
    Your superhero or badass
    Heís your everyday prince charming
    Wearing nothing but class.

    He could write you a million sonnets
    Show you the sun and the stars
    Protect you from the rain
    And for you collect scars

    Jump in front of a bullet
    Maybe fall for you by chance
    Love you forever
    And ask for this dance

    So believe him when he says
    Iíll be here until the end of days
    And know heís not lying
    Because in your heart is where he stays

    BecauseÖ
    Heís not your shining knight
    Your superhero badass
    Heís not prince charming
    But heís in your heart at last.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Heyy Kyle
    I think this is really cute. Girl seem to have some kind of expectation for guys to live up to and in my opinion guys put way too much pressure on themselves trying to fill those unrealistic shoes just so they can win over a girls heart. Frankly, I think all girls just want to feel safe and loved, which you clearly state guys are capable of through this piece. The rhymes are simple and sometimes seem a bit forced but generally it gets your point across. They only part that kinda erks me is this.

    And swords arenít his skill
    Heíll steal your heart
    His words will kill

    The last line in that seem kind of off in the syllables and rhyming of the line it is supposed to be matched to.
    Other than that, great piece =]
    | Posted on 2010-01-04 00:00:00 | by giver_of_death | [ Reply to This ]


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