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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    21.F.NV
    Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 30/22/20
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Political
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    Tap, tap, tap. Clicking away at the laptop keys, immersing myself in notes concerning Marx. Although, my focus is not here. I want my focus to be in this room. I want to be back home more so. Still, I feel "under the weather". Physically? It's more than that. This fatigue is hitting me on so many levels. He's back.




    Submitted on 2009-10-20 13:26:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you feel "under the weather" because you let yourself. you can control the way you feel. mind over matter.
    (peter pan can fly thinking happy thoughts)
    imagine that was real besides the fact that we must abide to the laws of gravity and think how it must be to always be thinking happy thoughts like pan manifesting flight out of happiness. lets fly in our minds and then soar thru life on a positive vibration.
    connect to the collective conscious.
    | Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by ghad | [ Reply to This ]


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