In Love with the Darkness pt. 2 by Xiallia

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Author:	Xiallia
ASL Info:	17-F-Missing Osaka[IL]
Elite Ratio:	1.49 - 3/23/32
Words:	112

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
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I never realized I was going to do a part 2...*shrugs*

In Love with the Darkness pt. 2 dots

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I leave my Father, ready to face the Darkness alone....

The shadows seemingly welcome me with open arms.
Soon i'm being choked.
Suffocating

Daddy...Where's my Daddy?

He's no-where near...
I wanted him to save me...
I'm not ready to face this alone, not yet.

Cold Icy Tears fall down my cheeks.
Slowly loosing my sight I look around...

I see my Father there just staring at me as I suffer.
My arm tries to reach out towards him.
He just shook his head soon fading into the darkness.

What should I do...what should I do....?

what should I do.....

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