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    dots Submission Name: colddots
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    Author: zercool13
    ASL Info:    18/m/pa
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 6/6/13
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 49
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    Bytes: 660



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    i have this feeling of cold
    like anger but worse
    emotionless toward you
    what can i say

    i have got nothing left to say
    everything things been said before
    and the breaking hour of dawn
    you try to comfort me so
    and cold is all i give
    its all i have to show

    yet you try so hard
    trying to warm my core
    where my heart once slumbered
    but there is nothing anymore

    so a cold shoulder is all you get
    one of pain and hurt
    you can't back the things that were done
    so with my my final goodbye
    i say
    so long




    Submitted on 2009-10-20 21:32:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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