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It’s like a déjà vu, Or a karmic experience. It’s hard to sit and watch, When I know how to handle this. My compassionate nature, And my too-strong love, Make me feel like a failure, Of this I’ve had enough. You can’t help those, Who won’t help themselves. It’s a tough lesson learned, When someone close goes through hell. Well maybe not so close, But God I wish he was. That monkey on his back, Ruins it for the both of us. I don’t want to be his world. In any way, shape or form. But I do want his world, To be good enough for him. I suppose it’s not my business, That I should walk away. But I feel that he’s worth knowing, So I’ll wait for another day. And though I speak from afar, I wish him all the best. I pray that he’ll find happiness, And from his demon, Get some rest. |
This is well done Jessica, and it tells a story that many should read. You have written with elegant structure, a continuous and lucid story line, and you show much talent! Good work! | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] | loving someone who loves something you don't often leads to your tears and wasted time. However, fighting for them makes it all worth it. | -Rachi- | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ] | |