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Fighting To Live

Author: manda_bear
ASL Info:    24;f; alabama
Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 57 /64 /23
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Fighting To Live

I fall down and cry out "Save me from myself!"
You reach out your hand to me
I take your hand and begin to cry
You see the fear and know I'm not gonna go
We hold each other and say it will be okay
I promised to fight this without a second thought
The headaches and the vomiting are part of fighting
To live for him my little angel
I want to live and give him everything
I will fight for it all no matter what
I cry and tremble as I realize I will not
Give into the fear of death that I face.

Submitted on 2009-10-20 23:03:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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