Verra well put together peice... I indeed enjoyed reading thing... such imagery and imagination. Writing what comes to mind to me is always best. My favorite lines...
*Apologies made; never bought.
Price paid turned out far too costly.
...This is absoutely inspirational to me. Again nicely done. Kudos!
*Applauds.*Bravo, I must say you new profile picture goes very well with this piece of poetry and it is a great visual for it. also on a side note this poem was very nice indeed. I loved the use of language and the way you wrote it the only thing I might change in the whole thing is at the end with the three dot's, I'd have put a comma, but if you know my writing style at all you'd know I favor comma's over anything else