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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    21.F.NV
    Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 30/22/20
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
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    One word. The word that crowns women and imprisons men. -well, for the most part.
    Shopping!
    Another word. Spoiled. Yes, label me with that if you will. I am truth; I am proudly the deer in the headlights. -as well as the emo kid in the corner, right now. Difference being, no need for a razor.
    How I long for time to roll in reverse. Roller coasters are questionable if they are flat however.
    Just remember mother-daughter time.
    My love for her is immeasurable.




    Submitted on 2009-10-21 12:40:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) I think you might be in the same place I was awhile back. Write, write, write, journal thoughts, then bring them to us... We'll read them and FIX you!

    Be careful what you let them see... everything is to be used against you in the Court of Thoughts. There is no such thing as Ironic Humor in the cold halls of Therapy.
    | Posted on 2009-10-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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