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    dots Submission Name: Slightly Susdots
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    Author: fictionalfiend
    ASL Info:    17/F/My mind
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 24/17/15
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Prose/Comedy
    Total Views: 40
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 523



    Description:
       Just a midnight musing. I have another one somewhere that I'll put up.


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    dotsSlightly Susdots
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    The pain was almost unbearable.
    I bit into the pillow to stop myself screaming. Why had I let him do this? Any sane person wouldn’t have.
    If a man asked you to take off your pants and lay on a couch so he could shove things into your arse you’d bolt in the opposite direction right?
    Well not brave, stupid, stupid me.
    I clenched my teeth as he pulled it out.
    The doctor smiled. “There we are. Your tetnis shot is up to date.”
    I winced as I pulled on my pants.
    “Yay…”




    Submitted on 2009-10-21 19:07:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha great. I was completely expecting something else. Lol good job, I expect to read more good things from you.
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahaha.. that one is funny!!!! i have seen some like this but i didnt expect it here.. :p
    | Posted on 2009-10-23 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]



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