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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    21.F.NV
    Elite Ratio:    6.6 - 30/22/20
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Religious
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    Ever been so happy? This was not the moment for that question. The more appropriate question, ever been so peaceful? I dare say that I hadn't in that instance. -the reason is not obvious, not obvious as to why. Why? Why lies in the past, such tormenting past. He was there, in that room, with that peace. He is still here now; I fear forever he lies within me. I hope not. Until then, the peace has finally arrived. Questions still overwhelm though. The other Him is what I truly want.




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      You aren't me, are you?
    I mean... I don't think I invented you.
    But if I did, I couldn't have done a better job doing it.
    | Posted on 2009-10-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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