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    dots Submission Name: No Turning backdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 16
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    dotsNo Turning backdots
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    When night falls down
    Windows blow open
    This is my life now
    There is no turning back

    Every movement feels timeless
    Behind glassy eyes
    This is how I see the world now
    There is no turning back

    Your words mean nothing
    That my mind can comprehend
    This is how I hear the world now
    There is not turning back

    The cold bites my skin
    As I overheat inside
    This is how I feel the world now
    There is no turning back

    Words voice my soul
    As lines describe my mind
    This is what I do now
    There is no turning back

    This change was inevitable
    More grueling than a heart attack
    This is who I am now
    There is no turning back




    Submitted on 2009-10-22 07:20:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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