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Submission Name:
Dreary Haze
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Author:
dthforeverpain8
ASL Info:
15/Female/tmon
Elite Ratio:
3.36 - 92/158/234
Words:
196
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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Dreary Haze
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The world around me is blurry
Everything makes me laugh
All I want is another cigarette
People warn me it better be my last
Don’t ruin my high
I’m just here to have fun
One more sip of alcohol
And it’s obvious I’m done
And we lay in the same field
As so many times before
But this time everything
Seems like so much more
The moon is so bright
All I can do is stare
Chilled to the bone
With grass in my hair
Pounding out drum solos
Crazed music pounds in my head
Pulling me out of this avalanche
And pushing me ahead
My ghosts appear
Skeletons from my dark past
Bring back down to earth
False pretenses I knew would never last
And you found me
On that most important night of all
You made me feel so stupid
You made me feel so small
I needed to cry over you
One last time
To weed you out
Of this heart of mine
And although I miss you now
I’m glad we’ve gone our separate ways
And you left me in
This dreary haze
Submitted on 2009-10-22 07:20:59
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