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    dots Submission Name: Assumptionsdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Bytes: 475



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    What do I have to do
    To make you see me?
    I’m not who you think I am
    Always hiding
    Lost in your bullshit assumptions
    Who the hell are you?
    You’re no better than me.
    Forget the lines
    I crossed them long ago
    And now its time
    To let my anger show
    Don’t get caught up
    Just move right along
    But you better watch your back
    Cause we both know
    You’re the one that’s wrong




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